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@naijapatriot12, based on your comments, I see the sense behind the paragraph as an "eye-catcher" and it is being retained.
But permit me to remove the phrase in bracket in bold, to avoid being tagged as "libel".
"It is unjust that in this nation, a cabal of few persons who brought this nation down on her knees still runs amok, whereas the employment of a few thousand youths (whose collective annual wages would pale in the face of single loot) has become a matter of contention. So far, the hopefuls have remained calm."
Also, your comments for correction are noted as follows:"the minister under whose watch this hogwash was perpetuated" now read "the minister under whose watch these recruitments are being carried out".
"If the NNPC management doesn’t have ulterior motives" has been discarded.
"billions of Naira have gone into sustaining the avarice of a few undeserving persons including top management staff of these two organizations". In this case, the bolded fond has been deleted, while the rest remains. However, the following bolded phrases have been retained, "by a privileged few" and "playing the ostrich", because that's the truth!
@ud, "lends" is corrected to "lend". @civilguru and @nn_mak, your corrections have been effected as "between July and September 2011" and "26th March" respectively.
@gly007, I captioned the Senate defence 'evidence' as follows "It is also worthy of note that increased personnel costs were defended by both agencies of the Ministry of Petroleum Resources at the Senate defense hearing. Addressing the Committee on February 2nd, the Director of the DPR, Mr. Austin Olorunshola, said the department was “about to recruit more staff within the next two weeks”. Also coming from the Minister of Petroleum Resources, “the slight increase in DPR’s recurrent budget represents provisions for anticipated recruitment of new staff to improve the overall effectiveness of the department”. It is however surprising therefore that four months after this promise, new hands are yet to be engaged".
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